September 10th 2020

Today was the second day of the presentation and 6 people presented about their book. Out of the 6 presentators, 2 of them,Hirofumi and Sara were in the same group as me in the presentation practice last week. While listening to their presentation, I relized that they made use of the advise like what Mitsuki did. For example, unifying the size of the image,talking clearly due to the mask,using more hand expressions and having more eye contacts. From these improvements,their slide were more interesting and entertaining for us to listen to. But most of them had problem with the URL posting. Not only that but people said "Um..." too many times which made the audience a bit bored.

Points

・URL

・Reduce the number of "Um..." "Ya... " "Ur..."

Notes

Hirofumi - Lord of The Flies  (good unifying size of image)

Sara  - Five feet apart  (great hand gesture,eye contact)

Akari   - The girl who wrote in silk (nice moving while explaining)

Tomoka -  Out of my mind  

Kokoro - The enchanted April (great photos)

Yuna    -    Sharlock Holmes