November 10th 2020
After listing out all the bad points and the points which can be made for better improvements of my book presentation, I had a short talk with Mr.Paterson. Almost all the points Mr.Paterson pointed out was listed down in my presentation bad point list. However, as we talked on further, there were points which I couldn't find out myself. For example, the underlining of the outline were said to be unnecessary as it leads for the audience to lose concentration and ends up being bored. Not just the outline, but the outlining of the website link listed in the reference slide was also said to be unncessary. Additionally, Mr.Paterson found out and told me that the size of the image used in the photo credit slide was slightly different. Throughout the slide check, I was sure that the size of the image were unified,but as I looked closer I was able to see the slight difference in the size. Overall, there were multiple points which I had to make changes. I will make adjustments and solve all...